Critique my edit

T-Van

T-Van

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So please leave some critique , i know that there were some bad fillers like the summersetup stuff , just wanted to make it longer than a minute !
 
I liked it but some of the tramp shots weren't needed so compensate by slowing a few of the banger tricks down and show them landing a little better. I thought the tramp part was just way too fast for my liking. Other than that I liked it it was relatively well done.
 
Black music White Kids. I really like the musical dissonance between the visual actuality and the perceived experience you achieved through digitally added chromatic lens flares in combination with an African american audiospace.

In other words pure 'art'.
 
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