Critique my edit

[b*man]

/images/flash_video_placeholder.pngthrew this up real quick, gonna make v.2 in a bit with more slow mo

 

[Mag]

literally loved it apart from the annoying ass blur vignette, if your gonna use one just make it black and less apparent.

 

[.spaghetticat.]

it was sick

but here is some critisim

1. get a better song

2. no blur vinegret (or what ever its called)

but other wize its DOPE

10 10

 

[cultrara]

if you get a new song make sure its around the same speed, i really like the pace of the edit. And fo sho cut that blur thing

 

[B1kessk1s]

nice but try shooting with a tripod. a lot of your shots are shaky

 

[b*man]

thanks for the feedback!

 

[kootenayklaus]

Not EVERY shot has to be done with stabilization, sometimes handheld shooting adds to the effect.

 

[eheath]

Cut the bad tv, cut the vignette, keep the song and quick cuts, loved that.

 

[Gmart]

inb4 new song but other then that pretty good

 

[juicedrummer11]

cut the vignette and better song maybe, pretty cool tho

 

[will_powder]

Knife show much?

 

[juicedrummer11]

sorta got this feel as well actually

 

[Raz.]

especially because of the exact same font they use...

 

[Belzebub]

I think the edit was SiCK!, but a few things 1.You should get rid of that blur thing, its really annoying. 2. It felt almost like a teaser or a trailer because some of the shots were cutted almost before you saw the landing, and it was a bit short(maybe it was supposed to be?). 3.You had many different angles, but i missed some followcam lines. A little critisism, but keep up the good work

 

[us1rk]

SICK!! 10/10but cut the blur