Critique my edit: take 2

[DG.3]

I tryed to take into account the feedback from my previous thread,https://www.newschoolers.com/web/forums/readthread/thread_id/528634/tell me what you guys think! again critique everything; skiing, filming, especially editing. ps. the last shot after the credits is just a joke with my friends lol.Seymour! from Dylan Gillespie on Vimeo.thanks guys! +k

 

[cultrara]

this skiing was good but i didnt like the filming: poor angles, too zoomed in or too far away, cilp cut short... other than that nice edit. I like the variation of features and tricks.

 

[jibbinc.]

Im not a pro filmer or anything but heres a couple tips ive picked up:

Film landings

dont use shots that arnt landed

dont cut clips short

dont slow down shots in 30p

de interlace the 30i / 60i shots.

dont use black screen as filler shots

be careful with song choice and how repetitive it is.

time beats to clips

Also the shots from seymour at its prime were dope, but after weve been snowed in and the rails are in ground its iffy. That last shot after the credits was probably the best if you removed the text+

 

[jibbinc.]

for filiming :

Get the whole rider in the shot

get REALLY close wit the gopro, takes some getting used to but you have to be alot closer then you think

 

[DG.3]

what do you mean by "de interlace the 30i/60i shots"?

 

[jibbinc.]

at like 1:25 for an example. 60i means 60 half frames a second, its if you de interlance it you will get 30fps. You can notice the interlaced shots when you slow them down, its like the pixels are kinda blocky

 

[Ducky.]

Sick dude!

 

[DG.3]

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