Critique my edit before tomorrow!

[POW-WOW]

I have to turn in our edit by tomorrow morning and I have already had to re-edit it once. I would really like some pros and cons! 10/10 K for comments and K for bumps. Thanks guys!

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[deleted2]

Too much slow mo, i didnt really watch all of it just like the first good amount of it, and there was soo much slow mo on uneeded slow mo shots i guess..

 

[POW-WOW]

Thanks I definitely agree. My friends wanted most shots slow mo so I had too. +K

 

[GrindEdit]

I agree with Kofsky 100%... but if you do want to keep some slow motion clips.. you need to fade in and out the slo-mo part so it is more smoth

 

[The-Rodent]

its alright but you should get some better angles and pans

 

[WillStart]

not true actually.

i'm guessing you mean ramping. i've had multiple people ask me how i did the ramping on some of my recent edits, and truth be told i have no idea how to ramp slow motion. you just have to know how to go to slow motion at just the right moment to give the illusion of a smooth transition into the slow motion.

if you actually mean fading in and and out of slow motion clips, then you don't need to do that either. just have to learn pacing.

 

[POW-WOW]

Thanks everyone 10/10 for all.

WillStart haha just wondering did you notice the clips from your clutter file?

 

[WillStart]

Haha yeah, glad to see them being put to use!