Critique Me

[.newman.]

Just a few shots and timelapses and stuff that iv thrown together from the past few years.

Let me know what you think

embed is broken for me, so +k for embedding.
https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/599105.0/Eric-Newman-2011-2012?s=113735&t=2&o=8

Thanks

 

[.newman.]

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[will_powder]

 

[.newman.]

+K

 

[slugworth]

I liked the key framing on the time lapses but I'd add some more of a transition between the time lapses and the skiing. Also, get a little closer with your go pro

 

[.newman.]

Thanks

 

[.newman.]

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[DIX~]

That was actually pretty good for being filmed entirely on (I think) a GoPro. Kind of awkward mixing the time lapses and skiing like that, might have been better to keep them separate or focus more on skiing. Timelapses work as fill for skiing but skiing does not work as fill for timelapses is what I think I'm getting at

 

[j.benziger]

It was pretty creative for just being shot on a go pro but i thought there was going to be more skiing. But it was still pretty cool.

 

[.newman.]

thanks guys.

+k

 

[MLeone]

very impressive for being shot solely on a go pro, enjoyed your framing on a few of those TLs. nice job man.

 

[Shredability]

Cool man, I liked it!

 

[SNP_CREW]

if youre gonna take the time to comment, read the OPs words first

 

[.newman.]

dumbass

 

[Ryan.Street]

I liked it! Very cool time lapses

 

[SnowMiser]

.newman's icon dances to the music!in all seriousness the time lapses, etc. look really nice. i understand this is just a demo reel to show off that stuff, but if it were a serious ski edit i'd ease up on the lapses and throw in more skiing. also, definitely get closer with your camera. it'll feel like you're cutting them off but that's just when it's perfect.

 

[.newman.]

Yea I hear you, this was completely just a demo, didnt have enough real skiing shots pulled together

+k