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I liked the key framing on the time lapses but I'd add some more of a transition between the time lapses and the skiing. Also, get a little closer with your go pro
 
That was actually pretty good for being filmed entirely on (I think) a GoPro. Kind of awkward mixing the time lapses and skiing like that, might have been better to keep them separate or focus more on skiing. Timelapses work as fill for skiing but skiing does not work as fill for timelapses is what I think I'm getting at
 
It was pretty creative for just being shot on a go pro but i thought there was going to be more skiing. But it was still pretty cool.
 
.newman's icon dances to the music!in all seriousness the time lapses, etc. look really nice. i understand this is just a demo reel to show off that stuff, but if it were a serious ski edit i'd ease up on the lapses and throw in more skiing. also, definitely get closer with your camera. it'll feel like you're cutting them off but that's just when it's perfect.
 
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