Critique +k!!

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ur skiing isn't bad i would just say work on some more angles...keeping the camera in one place gets the watcher bored but your spins...holy shit! just keep working on video man +K
 
Ok to start off there needs to be a variety of shot types. All your rail shots were all the same, different shot types help make the video more interesting. It gets a little boring just watching the same shots over and over again. Zooming in and out for the jump shakes the camera a lot, I would suggest getting closer to the jump or just don't zoom in or out.

The color looks very good especially of the rail shots! Nice spins also, very impressive. Keep working hard on the edits, you will learn more and more, the more you edit videos.
 
if i were you i probably would have mixed the rail shots in with the jump shots so you didn't keep seeing the same angle over and over, but that is just me
 
i would agree, the same angle got old fast, skiing was ok, the jumps were actually sick (that handdrag was amazing), id only put the best shots in, like on that box there were a few that shouldnt have bee in there

but overall nice job
 
First everyone below me was right you need more angles also that intro was poor and choppy by being put in the video. You want your into to be more seamlessly in the video you don't really want it to disrupt the flow of your video. Also your logo or whatever for SCM was in a picture which I would recommend is get rid of the picture and then overlay the text on some video shots you already have. That is just my .02 cents
 
What the fuck.

Dude at first I was watching the rails and was like, ghey, then it cut to jumps and I flipped shit. The kid can barely k-fed but can cork 7?! Thats pretty crazy if you ask me.
 
I liked it but I felt that all the tricks were a little repetitive. I also agree that you should have maybe got more angles for shots. but overall it was good
 
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