Agreed.
I like what you were trying to do with the intro. But this isn't a serious edit. I'll be quite honest, the transition from the slow song to the rap completely lost me and I stopped watching when I saw Aunt Jemima. It's fun to throw stuff like that into a fun edit that shows the day, but if you want a serious, critique-able edit, you gotta try harder than this to cut this shit and put together something truly cohesive.
I know that sounds pretty harsh, but take from it what you will and learn. I'm sure that if you're serious about making a serious edit, you can do it - everything is there - but I'll be honest, this isn't it.