Constructive picture commentary.

ones that could be improved are:

"flying solo" looks pretty cool, nut it looks a tad over exposed, it is easy to over expose shots of water because it reflects so much light, same with the photo after "flying solo"

"Lllllightpost" is a pretty cool shot, i just wish the middle was a little bit sharper

the b&w shot of the bride is pretty cool, it would be even better if you could have backed off and got the whole reflection in the water

Other than that there are some cool ones, and some that don't really do it for me, but some cool shots for sure
 
"San Francisco" has potential, but if you can, you should definitely turn down the ISO on your camera, because even though that makes it need less time to expose, it makes photos turn out really grainy.
I very much like "Untitled" (one of the lighthouse thing), but I feel like you've positioned the lighthouse too far to the left of the frame...the space between the lighthouse and the left edge just seems uncomfortably thin. That is my only issue with that photo, the subject, angle, and lighting is all perfect.
One of my favorites is "Hood Droplets", it has a real nice modern feel to it. It's simple, and does the job.
The last photo on the first page, the black and white one of the bridge, is really cool. What would make it even cooler if you could widen your perspective so that the reflection of the bridge was also fully in the frame. Only a suggestion, but it's something I would have done.
As for the second page, I REALLY like "Marina". The red light and the reflection on the water is key. Again with the night shots, turning down the ISO is pretty much necessary, but not as noticeable here.
You've got a handful of real nice shots, and then a good amount of shots that could be real nice shots if a few small things were changed.
 
Back
Top