Some awesome shots in there! Really liked the colors you achieved
IMO
- Too long, film reels should be a bit shorter, you don't want you audience to loose interest, so maybe cut some of the uninteresting shots, like for example the pan from like 0:17 to 0:26 is a little blown out, lacks a subject, and just feels a little unnatural.
- The title sequence is sick, i dig the first part, but the "a collection" title is unnecessary and just adds length.
- It's just my opinion, and obviously cinematography is subjective and unique to whatever style your going for, but I think you went a little overboard on the zoom in/ sharp cut / heartbeat kind of transition in the beginning ...especially when its in the same shot, it just kind of jumps randomly to a different part of the pan which doesn't flow.
Still super sick though, keep up the good work brotha