No. That was awful. The themes,phrases, delivery, and timing was all off. The style is old, drop the scarface thing. I am being short and to the point. I understand these are just kids but this idea that an image makes you an mc has got to stop. stop using all the same lines and words as everyone else. find your own voice, your own style express what really happens in your life, express imagery that paints a picture, express creativity. do not fall into this category of "rappers" that think they flow, at least flow in time with the kick and snare or syncopate your rhythms and delivery with purpose. I am sorry but all of the music I have just heard is not creative and a shame. find your own niche of hip hop and your own style, stop trying to be something you are not. sorry to be rude but the music business is very direct and if kids are trying to break into it they should be told the truth. but on a positive note at least they are doing something some what constructive with their time.