Check My Beats

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i been on the lookout for unsigned fire like this !!! my manager will be in contact !!! mixtape dropping october 25th be on the lookout !
 
fuckin fuckbois u showed those fuckers how a fuckin song gets made. FUck yeah fucker fuckbois cant say fuckin shit.

On a more serious note, ive been rapping quite a bit lately, and while i like some thing about your beat, the horn drop, the drums arent bad, that whiny melody is fucking anoyying and repettitive as fuck. maybe think about switching its speed up, or generally fucking with individual pieces of it to give it a more unique sound. At least that's what i would want to rap over.
 
Gave it an honest listen, and it wasn't very good. 3/10, would not listen to again.

Good news is that you can still get better.
 
13093034:Chubz. said:
Do u dylan fuck the h8rs. Idk why youd come to ns for critiques anyways.
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You're 100% right. Why would I come here? Lol everyone here still thinks Wu Tang is still relevant.
 
13093969:danderson said:
You're 100% right. Why would I come here? Lol everyone here still thinks Wu Tang is still relevant.
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Granted I'm not a huge wu tang band wagon like many others. But I feel like wu tang will always be relevant in the rap game. Kinda like tupac, biggie, Nas and the fat boys. But your shit is garbage. It seriously sounds like you took 10 minutes of your life to download fruity loops to make a fruity beat. It's lame man, its so basic and pretty predictable for the most part. Throw in some different elements like; skill.
 
13093975:420... said:
Granted I'm not a huge wu tang band wagon like many others. But I feel like wu tang will always be relevant in the rap game. Kinda like tupac, biggie, Nas and the fat boys. But your shit is garbage. It seriously sounds like you took 10 minutes of your life to download fruity loops to make a fruity beat. It's lame man, its so basic and pretty predictable for the most part. Throw in some different elements like; skill.
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No one is fucking checking for any of those people. Do any of you even listen to current rap or know the slightest thing about it?
 
You probably don't care about my opinion, but both beats were horrible. Just truly irritating to listen to. It got to the point I was hoping you were going to splice in some lil jon vocals to take the focus off these horrendously bad beats.
 
those beats were solid but there is something missing, you need to add a little heat to them. spice them up a bit
 
13094056:Casey said:
You probably don't care about my opinion, but both beats were horrible. Just truly irritating to listen to. It got to the point I was hoping you were going to splice in some lil jon vocals to take the focus off these horrendously bad beats.
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Well, you were right about one thing.
 
haters gonna hate. beats were dope, i'd play em at a club or party. i really liked xanax memories but u need to add a little spice to it to realy add sum bang. like get a couple vocals in it of a guy screaming shit in the background.
 
"This one's for all the fuckboys who said I couldn't produce 'cause my shit didn't sound conventional. Here ya go."

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13094116:danderson said:
A person who listens to dust aka all 90's rap as well as some 2000's.
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Ns is packed with dustheads and kids who jack off to pearl jam. Definitely not the place to discus modern beats or music, unless its on the radio.

Especially modern hip-hop. NS sucks at new rap more than almost anything else it sucks at.
 
13094300:Lord_Byron said:
Ns is packed with dustheads and kids who jack off to pearl jam. Definitely not the place to discus modern beats or music, unless its on the radio.

Especially modern hip-hop. NS sucks at new rap more than almost anything else it sucks at.
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Ohh the fallacy of the converse
 
13094117:Lucky. said:
haters gonna hate. beats were dope, i'd play em at a club or party. i really liked xanax memories but u need to add a little spice to it to realy add sum bang. like get a couple vocals in it of a guy screaming shit in the background.
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LOL, Lucky has the shittiest taste in everything.
 
It was.... ok

I will admit that I don't listen to music like this that often but i found it super repetitive and not very interesting

4/10 would listen again
 
It was interesting..... I found it kinda fun to listen to after the 10hr intro but then it got very repetitive. Nice work anyway!
 
As someone who produces I will give some real feedback. Honestly not a bad start if your just gettin into producing. However, sounds like you used a LOT of presets. Spend some time learning sound design and make some of your own sounds. Also your drums are real thin. Do some digging around the internet and spend some serious time looking for good drum samples (beyond just downloading shit that says "TRAP DRUM SAMPLE PACK FREE DOWNLOAD!"). Also don't fall into the trap of making a few layers and then copying and pasting the same 4 bar or 8 bar loop in different places and in different arrangements. It will sound amateur and repetitive 100% of the time. Really spend time listening to your track as you make it and actively think "where should this go next?". I find it helps a lot to listen to a track WITHOUT looking at the screen so you aren't visually anticipating parts coming in. But all in all not bad production for a beginner. Not my cup of tea musically, but everyone's got to start somewhere.
 
13095589:TNORTS said:
As someone who produces I will give some real feedback. Honestly not a bad start if your just gettin into producing. However, sounds like you used a LOT of presets. Spend some time learning sound design and make some of your own sounds. Also your drums are real thin. Do some digging around the internet and spend some serious time looking for good drum samples (beyond just downloading shit that says "TRAP DRUM SAMPLE PACK FREE DOWNLOAD!"). Also don't fall into the trap of making a few layers and then copying and pasting the same 4 bar or 8 bar loop in different places and in different arrangements. It will sound amateur and repetitive 100% of the time. Really spend time listening to your track as you make it and actively think "where should this go next?". I find it helps a lot to listen to a track WITHOUT looking at the screen so you aren't visually anticipating parts coming in. But all in all not bad production for a beginner. Not my cup of tea musically, but everyone's got to start somewhere.
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Real. Thank you.
 
13094300:Lord_Byron said:
Ns is packed with dustheads and kids who jack off to pearl jam. Definitely not the place to discus modern beats or music, unless its on the radio.

Especially modern hip-hop. NS sucks at new rap more than almost anything else it sucks at.
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This guy's got it.
 
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