Ceaseless Tides. A Visual Poem

AntiBang

AntiBang

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Hey everyone.

I'm a freshman film student at the University of Denver and I've just finished my first college-level project. I'd love it if you'd take the time to watch it leave me some feedback. It is, what I call, a "visual poem".

Here's the link. I'm total newbsauce so if someone could embed it for me I'd appreciate it
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Thank you
 
that was pretty sweet man. in my class someone did a visual poem also but there's wasn't nearly as detailed. very nice. i thought you did well with the sound too
 
really interesting....

you're talented in two art forms, both poetry and cinematography. putting the two together like this is new to me but i liked the way you made it work.
 
Really nice man, a few things I would change:

Maybe add some bass to the audio, duplicate your vocal track and drop the pitch.

If you had faded the lights in and out in the shots of your face it would have flowed better between the cuts.

Nice work though!
 
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