Care to critique my edits?

[Burrrlapz]

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/382870/member_id/119807/

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/355678/member_id/119807/

Not that great just want to know what people think.Im 14 years of age

 

[Balto]

pretty good actually, never talk your self down, its counter productive

 

[Heath.]

You don't need to age claim, it makes your look arrogent.

 

[A.Eberhard]

Liked the self edit, wouldn't change much to it had a good vibe. Don't claim your age it means nothing since like 12 year olds can do dubs now.