Can you critique my edit?

[pello]

It is too short but I want to know your opinion! here you have:
10 minutes with alex from pello on Vimeo.

 

[pello]

ops here?

 

[pello]

fuck!

 

[Daydreaming]

Short. Pretty good editing. I don't know shit about blading though.

 

[holyDINOSAURS]

vary your angles more and turn frame blend off.

 

[pello]

OK thanks! I´m going to try next time.

 

[gpitcher]

more features please, angles were just alright

 

[Chrris]

the swivel part on your tripod is too tight. When you turn the camera it's a quick and stop kind of motion. Try and go slower and smoother, it may take a while to get better at but it will help you out alot. And same with the zoom, you're going way to fast so it doesn't looks as good. I hope those help!