Beat I made. Feedback?

[MACAQUE]

http://soundcloud.com/gnarnia/almost-was-but-not-really
Here's a beat I made. This is my first attempt at this type of thing. Post what you think of it.

 

[speightphoto]

sorry but i didn't like it whatsoever.

 

[GORlLLA]

My feedback is don't post the same thread in 2 different categories (Ones like Media + Arts and also Non-Ski Gabber, but those are just two random examples)