Backcountry shredit edit! +k for critique

[ripcity]

okay I gotta claim first edit ever, but it would be awesome for some fellow shredders to offer me up some tips on the edit. It was my first time on any editing system so I kept it basic, but any suggestions would be cool. Hopefully this embed thing works out for me.

 

[HFkiller]

that looked like a fun day with friends. it was a good edit but i would like to see more camera angles. the guy that comes in at 0:50 has a camera mount coming out of his backpack (i think) it would have been cool to see a few shots from there or a few helmet cam shots would give some more variety.

 

[ripcity]

that was me at :50, the pole coming out of my pack is the one I would have been holding if I wasn't holding the camera pole mount to film. And I forgot my helmet mount clip so that was out of the picture but thanks dude!