B-active. watch and critique please!

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[-mvee-]

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heres my latest short edit of summer activities. my second edit will have actual (good) wakesurfing too.critique if you could too...colors, shots, etc. its nothing too crazy but i thought ns might enjoy it and give me some useful tips for next time.

 
A couple things I noticed:

1. Way too many out of focus shots got a little annoying

2. Some shaky shots, especially in the beginning. I've never filmed off a boat but I guess it's probably hard to stabilize well.

3. The water ripple effect is a little amateur in my opinion

I liked the shots at the end with the close up of the wake boarder, made me feel like I was in the water watching. I enjoyed it and will look forward to seeing some more.

 
1. i know music is "personal preference" but please pick a better song, shitty rap is has been done a million times, get creative2. shaky shots

3. unnecessary long clips

4. out of focus shots. it looks like your shooting on a dslr so learn how to focus better and shot at high apertures so your depth of field is bigger
 
thanks man. yeah i meant to have the shaky shot of the tree...it was supposed to be like a sway idk.and the water ripple was indeed cheese. haha.
 
The longboarding segment was incredibly boring and unnecessary. We all know you can ride straight down a 3% grade.
 
my newer video! check it out and tell me what you think. not much different but nooo longboarding.....

 
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