Any advice accepted

i only listened to the beginning but it seemed really choppy, make it smoother, unless you were going for choppy and edgy, but in that case i am not a fan
 
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...well...uhhhmmmmmmm...

There's potential, but not much is really solid. I'd fine tune it a bit and make it less choppy.
 
i think i can tell what your going for...but im drunk. that dun nu nu nu dun nu nu nu needs to be sped up and the higher chirping needs to be when thedun nu nu nu starts.
 
haha this is pretty funny...first of all no i dont think its very good just thought id put it up cause i put it up on soundcloud for a friend to hear what i was doing.....it is choppy that was spose to be more of a build up to the last 6 seconds...which i actually really like where the beat drops at the end.
 
use a metronome to get the beat placements right. build up to the bass track. and add melodies after a good intro. not terrible, but it does need work.
 
that was fucking awful. you can't give advice on that because there's nothing to go from. if someone asks you for advice on their cake and they give you a pan full of shit how are you supposed to react?

just. give. up.
 
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