Alright, first off, this is my Senior Thesis. Im doing advertisements, without text. Alright, so I did an anti smoking ad. Im going to add smoke still. But what do you guys think?
As far as the picture (I'm assuming you took it) - it is very powerful. The child's expression is great. What do you mean by "I think I'm going to add smoke" though?
Definitely smoke coming off a cigarette in the ash tray, but not off the child's, since I assume you're going for a contemplative look. Its really great.
hahhahha if he could have text yes. but i think the kids emotions were captured perfectly, and the message is pretty strong, add that smoke and you are good to go!