I honestly can't stand the way you write in your third-person self-appraising tone. You also make so many grammatical errors. Tell me, would you say "Myself headed down to the..."? No. It's "The Splice Crew and I headed down to...". And who the hell is the "Splice Crew"?
This is what you wrote
"On March 21, 2013, Myself and the Splice crew headed out to
Saga Outerwear's showroom to catch up with our friends and of course, get swagged out by our favorite clothing company! \u200B
On March 21, 2013, \u200BMyself and the Splice crew headed out to
Saga Outerwear's showroom to catch up with our friends and of course, get swagged out by our favorite clothing company! It started out as any store visit usually would. We looked around, asked for different sizes, and all of that junk. Then, out of the back emerged a sweaty Nicky \"Meatboy\" Keefer. We had met the previous summer at
Windells Camp in Mount Hood, so we reunited then he stole gatorades and left. Then, my good friend Jerm, the man with a plan in Saga, offered me to be on their Instagram. Me, being a Saga \"super fan\" I instantly jumped at the opportunity. ","wysiwyg":{"source":""}}" data-block-type="2" id="block-6399447c64f6f35e7935" style="position: relative; clear: none; z-index: 1; padding-left: 12px; padding-right: 12px; word-wrap: break-word; padding-bottom: 0px;">It started out as any store visit usually would. We looked around, asked for different sizes, and all of that junk. Then, out of the back emerged a sweaty Nicky "Meatboy" Keefer. We had met the previous summer at
Windells Camp in Mount Hood, so we reunited then he stole gatorades and left. Then, my good friend Jerm, the man with a plan in Saga, offered me to be on their Instagram. Me, being a Saga "super fan" I instantly jumped at the opportunity.
“Look who stopped by the #sagashowroom today, who can identify this #newschoolers legend?”
— @sagaouterwear
4 hours later, and 140 new followers later, the hype died down.\u200B\u200BFollow our instagrams:\u200B\u200B@therealsplice\u200B@sagaouterwear@splicemediagroup","engine":"visual"}" data-block-type="2" id="block-e6df9c78151788308f6d" style="position: relative; clear: none; z-index: 1; padding-left: 12px; padding-right: 12px; word-wrap: break-word; padding-bottom: 0px;">4 hours later, and 140 new followers later, the hype died down."
Here's how I'd have written that.
\u200B
On March 21, 2013, \u200BMyself and the Splice crew headed out to
Saga Outerwear's showroom to catch up with our friends and of course, get swagged out by our favorite clothing company! It started out as any store visit usually would. We looked around, asked for different sizes, and all of that junk. Then, out of the back emerged a sweaty Nicky \"Meatboy\" Keefer. We had met the previous summer at
Windells Camp in Mount Hood, so we reunited then he stole gatorades and left. Then, my good friend Jerm, the man with a plan in Saga, offered me to be on their Instagram. Me, being a Saga \"super fan\" I instantly jumped at the opportunity. ","wysiwyg":{"source":""}}" data-block-type="2" id="block-6399447c64f6f35e7935" style="position: relative; clear: none; z-index: 1; padding-left: 12px; padding-right: 12px; word-wrap: break-word; padding-bottom: 0px;">"March 21, 2013 [/b]- Today I went down to
Saga Outerwear's showroom to catch up with friends and check out what they've got in store.
They showed their product line in the showroom, then Nicky "Meatboy" (This is an atrocious nickname, I don't know why you'd include it) Keefer came in to hang out. I met Nicky the previous summer at
Windells Camp in Mount Hood, so we reunited and caught up with each other before he headed out. Saga Outerwear's Jeremiah Paquette snapped a shot of me at the showroom and threw it up on Instagram.
“Look who stopped by the #sagashowroom today, who can identify this #newschoolers legend?”
— @sagaouterwear
4 hours later, and 140 new followers later, the hype died down.\u200B\u200BFollow our instagrams:\u200B\u200B@therealsplice\u200B@sagaouterwear@splicemediagroup","engine":"visual"}" data-block-type="2" id="block-e6df9c78151788308f6d" style="position: relative; clear: none; z-index: 1; padding-left: 12px; padding-right: 12px; word-wrap: break-word; padding-bottom: 0px;">It was a great day catching up with all of the guys at Saga Outerwear, I'm stoked to hang out with them again in the future!
- Justin"
I'm sorry but the way you wrote it was tragic and nobody will take you seriously if you write like that.
Just... Stop hyping yourself up because you can't live up to it. Put out good shit, people will like you. Run your mouth about all of the good shit that you will put out but never do, people will hate you.
