Another Critique +K
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Bmo.
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Just a couple quick things>did not find the song to compliment the skiing at all, idk maybe its just personal preference
>for hand-held, it was actually pretty decent. But if you wanna improve, you gotta get that tripod and/or glidecam
>try and mix up the shots. dont show 5 shots in a row of the same rail from the same angle with the same rider. n'a mean?
>Maybe you were just practicing, but it seemed like a real shitty day to film. the gray skis gave the edit a gloomy vibe for me. not your fault, but if you wanna get some nice looking footage, wait for some sunny days, or watch more edits and see how you can make cloudy days look better.
>When following a rider, try and maintain however much of the rider you start with throughout the hole shot. let me explain: if your following a rider, try and keep his whole body in the frame for the whole shot. if you choose to only get like his skis and boots in the shot, try and keep that position throughout the shot, Although you can play with that a little. This paragraph was prolly really confusing as i wasn't very good at wording what i was thinking.
you did have some nice shots in there and i did enjoy the edit. this is all constructive criticism, just trying to help ya improve
>for hand-held, it was actually pretty decent. But if you wanna improve, you gotta get that tripod and/or glidecam
>try and mix up the shots. dont show 5 shots in a row of the same rail from the same angle with the same rider. n'a mean?
>Maybe you were just practicing, but it seemed like a real shitty day to film. the gray skis gave the edit a gloomy vibe for me. not your fault, but if you wanna get some nice looking footage, wait for some sunny days, or watch more edits and see how you can make cloudy days look better.
>When following a rider, try and maintain however much of the rider you start with throughout the hole shot. let me explain: if your following a rider, try and keep his whole body in the frame for the whole shot. if you choose to only get like his skis and boots in the shot, try and keep that position throughout the shot, Although you can play with that a little. This paragraph was prolly really confusing as i wasn't very good at wording what i was thinking.
you did have some nice shots in there and i did enjoy the edit. this is all constructive criticism, just trying to help ya improve
*SNO*
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Thanks so much! that might sound sarcastic.
Yeah, I changed the song once before uploading to vimeo and then changed it again before uploading to here, I really couldnt make my mind up what I wanted the edit's style to be.
And those two days were the only trip they made to mont blanc this season so we kind of wanted to film all the hills we went to.
Yeah, I changed the song once before uploading to vimeo and then changed it again before uploading to here, I really couldnt make my mind up what I wanted the edit's style to be.
And those two days were the only trip they made to mont blanc this season so we kind of wanted to film all the hills we went to.