Before I address the quoted post, I want to thank Arabian for a good critique that was honest. I know I'm not the best out there and I have shit to improve on. It's up to you guys to help me out, I'm still young so I got a lot of years ahead of me to make good music. My homies here can show love but sometimes tough love is what ya gotta give. Thank you all!
Anyhoo, back to quoted post. you guys are NOT bad. I've hears a lot of people who are worse than you out there. your vocal quality could obviously be improved a bit with a new mic but those are details. Your whole crew has some good flow, good rhymes. The delivery could be improved a bit, get a little more energy and more natural rhythms in the syllables. sounds a little forced, I have a similar issue at times. You guys got some skills though for just messing around, respect.