A Picture and a Story, Pictory

Elife

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Stumbled upon http://www.pictorymag.com/ today. Its a user-submission based website that is definitely worth checking out. There are a couple of themes open for submission right now.

Here's mine for the "Learning from our elders" theme

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A good portion of what I know now has come from a simple question asked

over and over again: “Hey Dad, what’re you reading?” From his well worn

post on the brightly lit side of the couch he would gladly put down the

New Yorker, Harper’s, Malcolm Gladwell, Steven Hawking, nonfiction and

fiction alike to answer his precocious prattling son. What those

writers had to say was a mere irrelevance to me but what my Dad had to

tell meant the world.

I always wanted was to know what was going on inside that distinguished

balding head of his. Something about his happy contemplative eyes

hidden behind the double-thick panes of his glasses let me know that

the thoughts he had were worth much more than a penny. It was my

childhood mission to pull every piece of available information out of

him, so that I might, one day, share his erudition and maybe even beat

him at a round of Jeopardy. He never got bothered by or bored with my

questions or impatient with his explanations, even if it did take three

hours for his 12 year old to understand the latest theories on the

genesis of human civilization. While I should’ve been watching TV or

chatting online with my friends I would sit on the arm of the couch

posing query after query until my mind was full.

Now that I’m 3,000 miles away I can still imagine him sitting under the

lamp on the left side of the couch reading while the rest of the world

watches television and shuffles around the internet. I call him weekly,

like picking up a trusted and spine-cracked encyclopedia, and I’m never

disappointed to find that his entries keep accumulating. He’s smarter

than me. I would never want it any other way.
 
A little bit. I might have rather seen just a continuation of the kitchen counter/background - it would've put more emphasis on your dad. I think its also the fact that it seems bright/well lit, too, which sets it apart from your background...
 
agreed... damn, too late to fix though. It's tricky to notice things like this when the photos are your own home, because I don't see the crop. I see the whole room; which is a living room. I guess that further illustrates my point considering you thought it was the kitchen counter. Oh well. Thanks for the critique though.
 
No worries mang. I know exactly what you're saying man, I get the same isht at my house shooting video.

By the way I hope you don't think I'm creeping on your pics too much, I just find them comprehensive and fun to respond to.
 
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