repost with black business card?

perhaps moving that logo a wee bit to the right and have the letters overlap the orange a little to see more of the logo, cuz its a sick logo

i dont like those arrows, and make your logo stand out a bit more, so it draws your eye to it, it does right now, but those arrows kinda throw it off.

thats sooooo much better but you have to much white space.. and with it being a buss card that type is going to be samll as hell to read... the first thing that I thought when i saw it was that there was to much white space and it needs to be shortened ( height wise ) and by doing so your list of what can do will be from top to bottom which would give the illusion that you can do alot of stuff.. ( thats good you want people to think that you can do alot of stuff )

& to be professional every thing is

ending in " S " it'll just look better if you get rid of them

- but these are just my opinons I am never telling you TO change things just giving other ideas for stuff...

OOOOOOOOO yea keep the arrows VERY unique.. keep them dont move your logo if any thing move your list to the left a wee bit

^I disagree heavily with ZRO.

I think the arrows should go away. And I also think that good negative space is very important, and you definately have a good balance how it is now.

The logo looks cool kind of cut off, its pretty modern looking. The bold list could probably move a little to the left.

Also, I'm not sure people will want to buy "bumber" stickers, haha.

negitive space is good but i am also takin examples from about 15 other bussiness cards in front of me ALL of which are for creative directors or graphic designers creative writers art directors and every thing so they are all from AD and design companys...

I say the best way to do this would be to make the logo a bit bigger and angle so it takes up the whole top left side of the card and then have the writing cascade in some way in the bottom right so it starts off wide across the bottom and gradually gets tighter as it goes up the side of the card.

I hope you understood that. I have the image in my head but its hard to put into words.