Piece im working on

preety dope, maybe ill drop the e and steal it for my own...hahaha jk lol!

what did you do this in...try drawing it out by hadnd to make the lines cleaner. unless it is hand drawn..in which case practice making it cleaner. lol.<br />
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can u throw though? do u do burners liek this only? or wildstyles and funk styles as well?

start over and learn how to do bars and extensions properly

aight, too many arrows

start with only letters no extensions/extras ... once you have good letter structure try some extensions/extras.

I did it in photoshop on my tablet which i just got so its not that clean... today at work im gunna bring it into illustrator and fix it up... ive never thrown anything so id probably be terrible trying to but its something i want to learn...Im not that good at graffiti but im tryin... this is going on the bottom of my longboard. not sure if im gunna hand paint, stencil or maybe airbrush it... but ill continue working with it.

lol just throw this in illustrator and do a live trace... done..

dont plan on airbrushing it unless you have decent enough skill.<br />
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work on letter structure alot more man. you cant start off doign crazy shit.

waaay too many arrows dude.. i dont do it much but i can tell u that...

i dig. imo the arrows are fine , presonally id like to see the letters seperate instead flowin together. maybe a thicker blue stripe round the outside would bring out letters