LINE ad i made for tamara bored

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  GeneralDisorder

• Dec 31, 1969

just let me know what you think of the design i only worked on it for 15 mins. But this is the field of work i wanna do after i graduate college is making ads. so yeah critque's are welcome

 

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  Tbrody

• Dec 31, 1969

i think its way good but the skis look a little sketchy

 

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  GeneralDisorder

• Dec 31, 1969

yeah its from me downsizing it and making it under 100k. the good version looks tits

 

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  Crystal-needs-a-park

• Dec 31, 1969

not hot. not original and the recycling of the birds is sketchy.

 

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  erknz

• Dec 31, 1969

well, you got a double truck there from the sizing and proportions and all of your focal point is going to get lost in the gutter. and as for doing wanting to do design work after college...might help if you did design as a college major, as it is a career and people dont hire just anyone (shut up levin).

 

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  *cowboy*

• Dec 31, 1969

The birds are getting really annoying to look at. I'd say 40% of all the 'digital art' produced in the past both has had them. Try to be original!

 

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  GeneralDisorder

• Dec 31, 1969

well thats what i am majoring in

 

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  threejay

• Dec 31, 1969

the good version looks tits? i doubt it unless its a totally different picture cuz that sucks ass.

 

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  threejay

• Dec 31, 1969

the good version looks tits? i doubt it unless its a totally different picture cuz that sucks ass.

 

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  iamdan.

• Dec 31, 1969

the skis dont flow by just setting em in there. also the pink glow doesnt chill, try some other shit. And also the duplicated birds are really weird because like you can see the spots where you cut them out and tried to fade em in. Perhaps make your own brush set?