thats pretty good for your first shot, it looks like thats a hand exposure, if you use a tripod, you will get a really high quality shot... good stuff though
It's very over-exposed. Set your aperture lower and try it again.. don't shoot a long exposure directly into a street light either.. if you got rid of that light, it would've looked 100 times better. Try it again but tweak it a bit. Good idea.
yea harvey knows whats up. I duno if you can adjust the apature on your camera but you might wana play with that or just keep it open for a shorter amount of time. Also gettin some nice optice willl really improve how it looks as well.
