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  Lineskier-101

• Dec 31, 1969

nice, but the stickers on the board are kind of distracting. I'd try to make the whole picture darker to make the shadow pop.

 

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  *thebusiness

• Dec 31, 1969

the point is the stickers.. there the shop stickers and this was a shoot for the shop..

so having them in there is pretymuch the point.. plus the clothes are from the shop aswell..

 

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  velocicunt

• Dec 31, 1969

Advertise somewhere else

 

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  titsLOL

• Dec 31, 1969

I would really put some more thought into your pics if you are actually tryin to advertise shit man. cool location, but boring angle, composition, and lighting. It's kinda distracting to have multiple people in it too. If you crop it vertically where the girls hand ends I think it'd be a kinda cool shot. or perhaps if she wasn't there.

 

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  *thebusiness

• Dec 31, 1969

ok thanks for the input, this is straight off the cam, and not touched, nehow w.e i guess i should expect this from ns nehow

 

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  abek

• Dec 31, 1969

expect what? constructive criticism? because that's exactly what people are giving you. take the advice.

 

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  *thebusiness

• Dec 31, 1969

CLEARLY YEA, obvi all ns is pure criticism, and some is good and some is bad, but honestly ppl take things with a grain of salt, and other stuff its good facts, its a matter of pick and choose

 

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  ESfreeridepa

• Dec 31, 1969

i just find the girl in the back annoying because i have no idea what the hell she is doing

 

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  Maximumsushi

• Dec 31, 1969

What the hell are you talking about? You're posting garbage photos and people are giving you solid advice on how you could make them better. You're the one shitting things up and acting immature, not the members of newschoolers. Don't be such a dick.

A matter of pick and choose? I honestly don't understand what you're trying to say.

 

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  yelsel

• Dec 31, 1969

this is the worst advertisement i've ever seen. there just random photos