the sounds need to go, and i agree w/ huckfest, that forced gorilla steeze looks like poop...i was diggin the non-gorilla rails and the three's, good editing too
your non 'steeze' rails looked fine dont stiffle the progression, and there's trying to get publicity for yourself, and then theres dancing like a fag, but i thought it was pretty cool for an amateur bit of footage, i dont know about paying yet though