photoshop creation...advice for improvement

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  leithal1016

• Dec 31, 1969

 

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  leithal1016

• Dec 31, 1969

^has better quality if you click on it

 

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  skibum1854

• Dec 31, 1969

thats so sick, it might even be better with out the film

 

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  leithal1016

• Dec 31, 1969

minus the film

 

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  robbieA

• Dec 31, 1969

^ i like that opne better

 

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  Jwenz

• Dec 31, 1969

i like the one without the film

 

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  xtemporal

• Dec 31, 1969

neighter of them. But i bt it will look much better if you crop it. get ride of the shit on the left side. Maby find a font that fits better. hehe. The background and the white brush is HOT man. It´s realy smooth.

You can try to take away the text and the skier and put the initials in the middle. LF in a old font that looks just like the brush you used.

 

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  jibtastic

• Dec 31, 1969

^ This guy pretty much completely re-works everyones art.

 

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  leithal1016

• Dec 31, 1969

hahaha

 

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  leithal1016

• Dec 31, 1969

but i do get what hes saying, i need to rework it to get a more balanced look....that might be buried somewhere in that comment