The only random thing here I see is the typography. Honestly though, if it takes you 5 minutes to lay out some type and use some gradients, re-think what you're doing. Put some thought into it, use typography that works. Typography that works is typography that draws the viewer to the important parts and subtly includes less important parts (in association with WDesign).
Given that I'm assuming it's a ski movie... maybe a skier is appropriate?
I quite like it dude. It looks really quick and clean and im sorry SteveXs2*$ but i can understand it, i dont know what your talking about. Mabey you should look at some of his movies then youl get what it means, nice advice though. But i think for how quick it was it looks good!
