i tryin to get better

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  NME

• Dec 31, 1969

 

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  NME

• Dec 31, 1969

sorry its so small

 

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  NME

• Dec 31, 1969

sorry its so small

 

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  Ghst

• Dec 31, 1969

i like the car coming out of the stripe
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  johhnn

• Dec 31, 1969

you need to fix up that stripe, and feel in the text in the 'm' and 'e'. also get rid of the lips. maybe make the stripe colours match the car ones

 

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  BlindFaith

• Dec 31, 1969

yeah the stripes need to be cleaned up and the tv is super awkward just sitting there with the stripes on top of it.

 

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  wdbo.

• Dec 31, 1969

ya clean up the stripes, get rid of the lips mybe try and make tv a little less out of place
also maybe make the nme flow a little better
other wise you are definatly getting better keep it up

 

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  matthasaurusrex

• Dec 31, 1969

always save as .gif, it will be more clear

 

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  spin

• Dec 31, 1969

too many generic elemements. i like th ehands & the lettering, but everything else looks C&P. for all that its still kinda cool. work on some freeform stufff though

 

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  keepon_trucking

• Dec 31, 1969

sweet