This is kinda cool, but really distracting. Try a portrait shot rather than landscape style, to get some more stuff in, i think if its in a crowded building (I'm assuming here) getting some people in the shot with doors or whatever would immensly make this better.
yeah, the building is really tight, so there's not much room for angling, but i like the idea of people in it, although it would have to be taken from a distance (this was taken looking up)
