Nice job, I'm glad to see you're done with twixtor, crushed blacks, and dubstep. That edit had a great feel going along with it. In the future I'd say you should make sure every shot is in focus and maybe purchase something to keep your camera stable. HDLSRs need stabilization. Good work though!
I have to ask though, why did you edit the song near the end of the edit? I really liked the "This is starting--to fuck with my head" line, and it was kinda awkward how you cut it up...