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I thought the music was really irritating, but it was unique anyway. I really liked the shots at the beginning with the fence, the snow chunk rolling downhill and the mountain goats, I even would have liked to see that for a longer time. Pretty solid, but the clips looked like filler or B footage except the snowboarder. Overall, I would keep watching, so that's what an intro is supposed to do. Keep it up, it would be cool to see the rest of the movie.
 
that pow shot was $$, I wasn't really diggin' the song though. The only thing I would change is trim down the shot with the dude jumpin the fence, other than that the editing looked fine
 
it looked like you were tryign to be like level one but it wasnt working out for you
 
its a nice edit, but i would focus a little more on skiing than wild goats...but nice job
 
I really like the pow shot but that 270 on should not be in an edit dude all so the person jumping the fence kinda looks like a gaper
 
If I were high, I'm pretty sure I would of been trippin out! But here are some things to work on... <br>
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-At the beginning the first shot is kind of long. So to make it more interesting and to give it a more eerie feeling, add a TV effect if you have one. It should create lines across so each light has a different brightness or darkness the video as if it was an old school TV. If your using Sony Vegas Pro 8 check out this tutorial <a target=_BLANK href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sQbcc2akEY">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sQbcc2akEY</a><br>
-Also, cut the in-run of the clip where the kid jumps over the orange fencing...<br>
-Another idea would be in the clip where he comes around the tree all sketchy like, cut it right after he pushes off with his poles.
 

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