Yo, I just threw this together tonight and am looking for feedback. It is the intro to a movie of some friends and I. Feedback good or bad on the editing would be appreciated.
I thought the music was really irritating, but it was unique anyway. I really liked the shots at the beginning with the fence, the snow chunk rolling downhill and the mountain goats, I even would have liked to see that for a longer time. Pretty solid, but the clips looked like filler or B footage except the snowboarder. Overall, I would keep watching, so that's what an intro is supposed to do. Keep it up, it would be cool to see the rest of the movie.
that pow shot was $$, I wasn't really diggin' the song though. The only thing I would change is trim down the shot with the dude jumpin the fence, other than that the editing looked fine
If I were high, I'm pretty sure I would of been trippin out! But here are some things to work on...
-At the beginning the first shot is kind of long. So to make it more interesting and to give it a more eerie feeling, add a TV effect if you have one. It should create lines across so each light has a different brightness or darkness the video as if it was an old school TV. If your using Sony Vegas Pro 8 check out this tutorial
-Also, cut the in-run of the clip where the kid jumps over the orange fencing...
-Another idea would be in the clip where he comes around the tree all sketchy like, cut it right after he pushes off with his poles.
