smacking the logo is probably not the best idea...
if u have taken art course, u would probably know about the rule of thirds. if u look at alot of paintings and sometimes even professional photos, u will notice that the artists dont smacke anything in the midde, but shifr it more to the side.
since u have the text only on the right side, if i were u, i would probably shift the logo a little to the left and maybe play around with it.
OR u could even turn the card around and make it vertical... this way u can still have the logo in the center, but put it higher or lower, if u know what i mean.
and i would make the font bigger, expecially your contact info.
i like the logo tho man. gj. i had that as my school project this semester, message me if u wanna see what i came up with
like i8car said put your logo to the left BUT try cocking it maybe have some of it run off the page like in the coner or something and your logo doesnt have to that big for a bussiness card..
and if thats an acuall card the " average" person isnt going to want to read that small ass font / type...
my goodness these people are pompous. i met a graphic artist/designer at SIA and he was the chillest cat ever. Only after hanging with him for a day did I realize he's one of snowboardings leading designers: his shit actually gets used on dozens of different boards. I met line's ski art dude. also a chill cat: tele skis on motherships. Dont let these haters get you down. especially the ones who go to art school.
heres my comment (and i dont know shit):
the logo is dope.
lose center column of tiny words.
go to armada.com and check out their help wanted page: theyre looking for a graphic artist.
i go to high school and just took an art class, where i learnt some basics.... i dont know shit either, but trying to provide constructive criticism and suggestions instead of just bashing!
its just a conincidence that i had a project for school to create a Personal Promotion Package, which included a business card. We had a teached who actually knows stuff and im just passing on his advice
